The neck is a bit too thin, the shoulder and arms look a bit odd, and you need to practice hair. That's my roast...
the hair and top on the right looks better, but I really like the face and the backpack on the left.
This is very good, especially for being a beginner. However, I would suggest the nose at a front angle, just as an easily solvable critique...other than that you have a solid piece.



KNKLRoast My drawing please!May 19 at 5:32 AM