Anyone wanna beta read my first CR fanfic?

Hi guys,

So I don't write fanfic a lot. Or really ever, tbh. I did do a CR-inspired flash fiction piece on my blog a while back but it was a very small and quickly written thing. Now I've finally gotten back to a fanfic piece I started in the spring and I was wondering if someone or someones wanted to read it and give me some feedback. I'm looking for both general feedback (what you liked/disliked, where the text was clunky etc) and also CR-specific feedback (was the brief characterization of the chars suitable?). It's not very long, just under 2000 words. It's Percy-focused, and it takes place about 2h 40 mins through episode 24 (The Feast), that is just before the uh... well, the feast with the Briarwoods. It's just a small "off screen" kind of scene. I actually just rewatched the episode to make sure I got the continuity right, haha.

Anyway, if you're willing, let me know and we'll either exchange addresses or I'll just post it here in the thread.