What I like about this one is the "probably." If I had tried to writs about this incident, I might have stopped because of my uncertainty about whether the creature was a wasp or hornet or a bee. I like it that the uncertainty is woven into your haiku. It's a freedom I admire.
What I like about this one is the "probably." If I had tried to writs about this incident, I might have stopped because of my uncertainty about whether the creature was a wasp or hornet or a bee. I like it that the uncertainty is woven into your haiku. It's a freedom I admire.
Thank you.
Was glad I found the words that day because I really badly wanted to write them.