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hockeyhockeyhockey

hockeyhockeyhockey

Hockey, but with kissing. And other stuff. >.> A hockey RPF comm.

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Posted byLasVegasNightsin/hockeyhockeyhockey-Oct 07, 2016 at 11:20 PM

what are you working on?

  • writing thread
  • discussion post

Porn is difficult, you guys. It takes SO LONG to write. /o\

Post about your writing trials and/or travails here. Or maybe a snippet to whet the appetite!

Comments16
  • RainyForecastOct 08, 2016 at 1:21 AM

    Also working on a Pens Monthly prompt, but I'm stalled.

    ... Some people had trouble getting past appearances. Jeffrey was 150 pounds of Dogue de Bordeaux, Zhenya was six-foot four feet of Russian. Both a breed and a nationality Americans tended to conflate with violence. And right now, at this moment, Jeffrey was not helping matters for either of them. Zhenya had let him out into the fenced front yard on his own for a moment, and apparently 1. The neighborhood had a new mail carrier and 2. Jeffrey had decided that a mighty volley of barking and much rattling of the fence were necessary, in order that this man know his place. The man, who had dropped his bag in shock on Jeffrey’s side of the fence...

    • frausorgeOct 08, 2016 at 1:32 AM

      Sounds like you have a lively opening. Hope you get inspired again!

    • LasVegasNightsOct 08, 2016 at 7:48 AM

      Oh no, Sid's mail. D: I hope Jeffrey is gentle with it.

      Good luck on getting unstalled!

  • BatikOct 08, 2016 at 7:41 AM

    The number of times I ask my beta, "But is it hot?" is probably beyond ridiculous. But it's so much easier to visualize a sex scene in my head than it is to type up all the details that go into that mental picture. (If a picture paints a thousand words, how many words does a smutty gif paint?!) I always worry!

    Kudos to everyone who is struggling with it at the moment and determined to win!

    • LasVegasNightsOct 08, 2016 at 8:24 AM

      I am slowly gaining confidence in my ability to make things hot, and porn doesn't take as long as it used to take. But it still takes a long time. /o\

      • BatikOct 09, 2016 at 4:28 AM

        For me, all writing (well, fic writing) takes a long time. I write short and concise in the real world. Writing long(er) in fic goes against (almost) everything my job teaches me. But I love the creativity of fic, and I love the feeling when I actually make it happen (and I love reading the results of other people's struggles), so I muddle/struggle through!

  • frausorgeOct 08, 2016 at 1:35 AM

    I'm still wrestling with the same thing I was working on last time. Three of the four parts are done but I just cannot get the last one to come together. I feel like I'm shoving puzzle pieces at each other that don't fit. And because it's about the playoffs I really want to get it done before the new season starts, so the clock is ticking. arghh.

    • LasVegasNightsOct 08, 2016 at 8:23 AM

      *cheers you on*

      Often when I'm having that "puzzle pieces that don't fit" feeling, it means I really do have to do something else. :( Is there another angle you can try?

  • spalingsOct 08, 2016 at 12:13 AM

    still working on hbb, though life kinda got in the way? and i'm nervous about not finishing on time.

    also planning a sequel to the logan couture/sid crosby fic i recently posted, which is really just a missing scene of them boning that didn't really fit with the format of the original fic.

    • frausorgeOct 08, 2016 at 1:22 AM

      Ooh, the sequel sounds fun! And good luck with the HBB. I'm sure if you keep at it, you'll get there!

    • LasVegasNightsOct 08, 2016 at 7:47 AM

      Oh hey, that Crosby/Couture fic was you? Neat. I liked it and commented on it, but I didn't realize you were the same person. :)

      Good luck on HBB!

  • LasVegasNightsOct 07, 2016 at 11:23 PM

    For Pens Monthly, eventually, if I can ever get through the boning. /o\

    Dumo looked up. He was flushed, and a sheen of moisture glistened on his forehead. “Shearsy,” he sighed.

    The next moment, Conor’s nose told him what was up. “Oh, dude,” he said blankly.

    “I know. I haven’t in, like—it’s been a long time. Playoff stress, I guess. You think Sid would be okay if I—?”

    “Climbed him like a tree?” Conor suggested, disbelieving. He doubted a single one of them hadn’t thought of it, but they also had noses and Geno’s ever-watchful eye to remind them that Sid was taken.

    • frausorgeOct 08, 2016 at 1:31 AM

      Porn is the most difficult. I'll cheer you on like a race sideline volunteer: you can do it! Run straight through it!

      • LasVegasNightsOct 08, 2016 at 7:47 AM

        <333

  • vandalsmileOct 09, 2016 at 6:10 AM

    I...am farting around with Bored All-Stars Giroux/Flower fic, and I've got about 1500 words, and there should be porn next, but I almost don't care about the porn? So maybe I'll kind of gloss over the porn and get to the ~feelings.~

    Anyway, have a snippet:

    He had no reason to say no aside from the fact that he’d be saying yes to Claude Giroux, and Sid might kill him if he ever caught wind of this. Sid who was on a goddamn beach right now with Geno.

    “All right, fuck it. Let’s go.” Marc-Andre chugged the last few swallows of his beer, but when he slammed the glass back on the bar, Giroux was staring at him with his mouth open.

    “What—I said let’s go.” Then his brain caught up with his mouth. “You were asking to fuck, right? Not just for my opinion?”

    Giroux’s blank expression split into a wide, gap-toothed grin. “No, I wasn’t just asking for your opinion."

    • LasVegasNightsOct 09, 2016 at 10:37 AM

      I am so into this. :D :D

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