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Posted byPammieWammiein/knkl-Dec 08, 2016 at 8:30 AM

Could I get some feedback on my cleric gnome for pathfinder before I start rendering?

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Could I get some feedback on my cleric gnome for pathfinder before I start rendering?

Yea so here's my gnome I'll be playing during a pathfinder campaign, she's a cleric with her deity being Sarenrae. I'd love some feedback on her. I didn't put much work into it but after a while I'd started getting into it and I might start rendering? What do you guys think?

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  • morrigansdemonDec 08, 2016 at 2:01 PM

    It looks pretty great! I love the palette! I'm no master at all, but here are some things that might be helpful..

    -again, WONDERFUL palette i'm always a sucker for oranges+ blues...

    • try identifying your light sources. Your shadows are just a lil bit all over the place
    • Compare the length of her arms and size of her hands to one another. One is a bit larger than the other. Easily fixed tho don't worry B)
    • Check the values maybe? I like to throw just a black layer (set to color) over my whole piece sometimes to see what my values are doing
    • If you're having some trouble with how the fabric falls, it might help to identify what kind of fabric she's wearing. Silk moves a lot differently than linen!
    • Great work on the crossbow and sword! I always have trouble drawing objects with hard edges lmao.... well done!!

    I can also redline this for you if you'd like! There's a link to my portfolio in my bio if you want to check my technical skill level before deciding if you want me to or not B)

    Anyways, these are just a few tips lmao... and again, i'm definitely no master. If possible, i'd wait to see if someone else comments with more/better advice before using mine lmao.

    Great work!!

    • PammieWammieDec 08, 2016 at 2:08 PM

      Yea feel free to redline, I don't mind. Yea I see now that the left hand from our perspective that the pointing arm could be a bit smaller, thanks for pointing that out. Usually when I go into actual rendering and getting red of everything I always go 1 shade darker and 1 shade lighter. So that might fix itself eventually.

      She's wearing regular cloth tho. I agree that my shades are a bit all over the place haha, usually I get a bit chaotic at the start. I wanted to basically go for left top. which the sword couters so I should probably fix that tiny bit.

      Yea feel free to redline.

      • morrigansdemonDec 09, 2016 at 6:03 PM

        i got a lil carried away but!! I hope this helps! I didnt address everything, but i got some basic blocking down

        https://68.media.tumblr.com/5138ce9321192364f30b4e7ed4d13134/tumblr_ohxzyjulSS1r7wic4o2_r1_1280.jpg

      • PammieWammieDec 10, 2016 at 7:09 AM

        I'll start rendering sometime during the weekend and stuff. Thanks for the paintover thingie haha I'll keep it in mind. I'll keep you updated when I have it finished, might be interesting for the both of us?

KNKL

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