Critique request

Critique request

Hey everyone, these are two of my characters that I created that I have set up in a splash art piece. I'm asking for suggestions and feedback. The back hand of "Ooma" the fat ogre girl is a little dark so I plan to lighten that up. She's supposed to be swinging a club(that's a tree) The basic story is, Sakura (the pig dwarf girl) accidentally uncorked a love potion around Ooma and this is the result.

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