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Critique request

Hey everyone, these are two of my characters that I created that I have set up in a splash art piece. I'm asking for suggestions and feedback. The back hand of "Ooma" the fat ogre girl is a little dark so I plan to lighten that up. She's supposed to be swinging a club(that's a tree) The basic story is, Sakura (the pig dwarf girl) accidentally uncorked a love potion around Ooma and this is the result.
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Here is your feedback. Hope it helps! :D
https://www.facebook.com/PSKIart/photos/a.1377976975756266.1073741826.1377975889089708/1635336360020325/?type=3&theater
hey thats an amazing feedback! unfortatenly I have to complete this tonight to get my thesis printed and i cant do any drawing changes, but this is definately helpful for future illustrations.
There are some compositional changes that I would make. I will post my suggestions in a couple hours. It would be easier to just draw it instead of typing it. :)