I like the dress, especially the sleeves. The pose in general looks nice! However, I think the neck looks a bit long and the face is a bit...squished? I think it's because you put that bit of hair there and moved the mouth up so that it would be visible. Also, I think your light is coming from the right side of the picture, which would mean the arm that's up by her face would be casting a shadow.
I think when I made that facial adjustment with the nose and mouth I didn't make some changes to her face shape. But I agree with you on the neck it does look a bit long and also maybe a bit thick in my opinion. About that shadow I was thinking of using the photoshop trick with where you select a part of the figure and make the shadow. I make those corrections asap! Thank you for feedback!
I really like the shapes and composition in this one.
Thanks Tygrenier!
I like the dress, especially the sleeves. The pose in general looks nice! However, I think the neck looks a bit long and the face is a bit...squished? I think it's because you put that bit of hair there and moved the mouth up so that it would be visible. Also, I think your light is coming from the right side of the picture, which would mean the arm that's up by her face would be casting a shadow.
I think when I made that facial adjustment with the nose and mouth I didn't make some changes to her face shape. But I agree with you on the neck it does look a bit long and also maybe a bit thick in my opinion. About that shadow I was thinking of using the photoshop trick with where you select a part of the figure and make the shadow. I make those corrections asap! Thank you for feedback!